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Constructive critique on a paragraph from my fan fiction?

It is Syndrome/Violet from the Incredibles, but you don’t need to like the movie or pairing to critique it: I tried to hate her. I really did. But those violet eyes penetrate me, and screw around with my inner workings. I told myself, “She is Mr Continue reading

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